Sunday, January 8, 2012

Six Sentence Sunday: Sacred Ring

In Sacred Ring, Kynan Murphy and his two friends sneak out early in the morning to go search for the sacred ring they believe has special powers. Kynan and Michael are just realizing how unprepared for the trip they are when their friend Brianna shows up.

Before he could answer, Brianna hailed them from across the street. And, of course, she was fully decked out in her heavy coat, a hat, scarf and warm gloves. She strode across the empty street toward where they stood under the street lamp. "I brought some snacks and water for later. One of you guys wanna carry one of these backpacks?" Must be nice to think of everything.

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  1. Nice voice! BTW, did you know your link from SSS is broken? had to backspace the url to get to this...

  2. I love the sarcasm in the last line! Great voice.

  3. Sounds like a fun story...

  4. I couldn't figure out how to edit the link in the list. Sorry about that. But I'm glad you persisted! Thanks for the great comments. :)