tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4839688330715120777.post1701944189851875012..comments2023-08-02T07:29:39.557-06:00Comments on inklings: Sweet Saturday: ShipwreckLeahhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17725517477366290193noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4839688330715120777.post-84983816603974711472012-11-28T23:03:26.494-07:002012-11-28T23:03:26.494-07:00Thanks, Jenna. :)Thanks, Jenna. :)Leahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17725517477366290193noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4839688330715120777.post-69041757252421788532012-11-28T23:02:12.293-07:002012-11-28T23:02:12.293-07:00I'm hopelessly far behind. :( But November is ...I'm hopelessly far behind. :( But November is historically an over the top busy month for me.Leahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17725517477366290193noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4839688330715120777.post-89042974549068067112012-11-28T23:00:50.320-07:002012-11-28T23:00:50.320-07:00I agree on the captcha, Marsha. Totally forgot I w...I agree on the captcha, Marsha. Totally forgot I was set up for that on here. Got rid of it for you for next time. :)Leahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17725517477366290193noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4839688330715120777.post-18364344584742707952012-11-28T22:59:53.209-07:002012-11-28T22:59:53.209-07:00Thanks, Sandy! It's hard to tell if the tensio...Thanks, Sandy! It's hard to tell if the tension is coming across as well as I see it in my head while I'm writing. Thanks for the feedback!Leahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17725517477366290193noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4839688330715120777.post-50567142828469690472012-11-28T22:57:50.492-07:002012-11-28T22:57:50.492-07:00Thanks, Jeff!Thanks, Jeff!Leahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17725517477366290193noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4839688330715120777.post-82458919588512147042012-11-24T17:00:13.304-07:002012-11-24T17:00:13.304-07:00Love it! Hope we;ll be able to read more! And good...Love it! Hope we;ll be able to read more! And good luck with NaNoWriMo.Patricia Kiyonohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14763838993363110626noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4839688330715120777.post-73097707329817395542012-11-24T15:56:16.195-07:002012-11-24T15:56:16.195-07:00Well-written scene with tension and suspense. I c...Well-written scene with tension and suspense. I could feel the pitch of the ship from the description and Elias's fear. So sweet to think of his wife at this dire time. Excellent job!Jennahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10308158251486924808noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4839688330715120777.post-51322922911708377222012-11-24T14:59:40.751-07:002012-11-24T14:59:40.751-07:00Wow, I'm cringing, just thinking of what will ...Wow, I'm cringing, just thinking of what will happen next. Great job, Leah!<br /><br />(I hate captcha, as do many folks. If this doesn't go through first time, I won't stay to try again.)Marsha Wardhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15389060049107102815noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4839688330715120777.post-73961991590586401292012-11-24T14:50:17.357-07:002012-11-24T14:50:17.357-07:00You did a great job of portraying the tension and ...You did a great job of portraying the tension and drama in this scene. Terrifying situation.Sandra Nachlingerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16906884446237370105noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4839688330715120777.post-11092544756370709502012-11-24T12:45:49.649-07:002012-11-24T12:45:49.649-07:00Jeff has said it all, I agree
Jeff has said it all, I agree<br />SherryGLoaghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16934189163201067429noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4839688330715120777.post-45496100070940245072012-11-24T12:04:15.155-07:002012-11-24T12:04:15.155-07:00wow. powerful scene. excellent description and t...wow. powerful scene. excellent description and tension-building.jeff7salterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00530506418169450704noreply@blogger.com